Sunday, December 8, 2013

Monkey Squad One #10. Pages 13 & 14.

If I remember correctly, U.N.C.L.E. Doug's original dialogue in the first panel on page 13 was "You're both keeping your gross little baby wieners in your pants the whole time we're here..." 

I changed it at the last second & omitted the "little baby" part because I didn't wanna embarrass Real-Life Brendan & Connor TOO MUCH.

I'm glad I changed it.

I know that the last panel on page 14 is a little awkward without the next page immediately available but that's what you get for reading these online instead of in print!



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